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1、ATestonWriting完全符合題目要求,內(nèi)容完整、豐富、健康。能夠使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯。語言通順,語意連貫,表達清楚,具有邏輯性?;緵]有語言錯誤。第一檔:(13~15分)Excellent要點結(jié)構(gòu)語言語法基本符合題目要求,內(nèi)容基本完整。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順,語意基本連貫,表達基本清楚。雖然有少量語言錯誤,但不影響整體理解。第二檔:(9~12分)Aboveaverage/Pass與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多,內(nèi)容不夠完整。只是簡單拼湊提示詞語,所寫的內(nèi)容難以理解。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多,表達不夠清楚。第三檔:(5~8分)Fail
2、現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)購(onlineshopping)越來越普及,請你談?wù)劸W(wǎng)購的利與弊,闡述你的觀點并給出理由。80詞左右。參考詞和句子:利:convenience;lowerprice;savetime弊:can’tseetheproducts;getcheated陳述事實利/弊/Content:Tense:個人觀點及理由一般現(xiàn)在時請同學(xué)們注意審題,分四段進行(開頭、利、弊、你的觀點及理由).Outline1.Introducton(nowadays/thesedays/atpresentonlineshoppingmoreandmorepopular)2.Advant
3、ages(ontheonehand/somepeoplethink…)3.Disadvantages(ontheotherhand/otherpeoplethink…)4.Youropinion.第一篇Atpresent,onlineshoppingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ontheonehand,itreallybringsusconvenienceandhelpsussavealotoftime.Notonlycanwebuythingswithout
4、goingout,butalsobuythingsatalowerprice.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingisnotgoodbecausewecan’tseetheproducts.Sometimeswemaygetcheated.Inmyopinion,Iprefertoshoponline.Becausethiskindofshoppingisbothconvenientandcheap.It’sagoodwaytosavemoney.AndIbelievemoreandmorepeoplewillchoosethisway
5、toshop.第二篇Nowadays,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Buteverycoinhastwosides,sodoestheonlineshopping.Differentpeoplethinkitdifferently.Somepeopleenjoyit.First,itisconsideredtobethemostfashionablewayofpurchasinggoods.Second,it’snotonlyconvenientbutalsocheap.What’smore,itsave
6、salotoftime.Youcanbuythingsbyclickingthemouse.However,otherpeopleholdtheoppositeview.Theycomplainthatit’sdifficulttodecidewhichtobuybecauseyoucan’tseetherealproducts.Andtheyareafraidofgettingcheated.Frommypointofview,Ipreferonlineshopping.NotonlycanIsavealotoftime,butalsoIcansavemo
7、ney.第三篇Nowadaysonlineshoppingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.Firstofall,it’sconvenienttoshoponlinebecauseyoudon’tneedtogooutandspendalotoftimesearchingforthingsyouwant,second,youcanbuymanydifferentkindsofthingsjustinoneplace—yourho
8、me.There’snoneedtodrivetod