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1、作文往往是四六級(jí)英語(yǔ)考試中考生們最頭疼且得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪0?,和基本的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的亮點(diǎn)或吸引眼球的閃光點(diǎn),必定會(huì)使你的作文錦上添花獲得不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)!高分作文標(biāo)志:1:是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);3、用詞是否多樣,準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;?5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫(xiě)好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí),句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we/I(比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用weshou
2、ldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ),比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如ho
3、wever/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說(shuō):Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper,approaches替換ways,implement替換carryout,sharpenone’scompetit
4、iveedge替換enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫(xiě)的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類(lèi)寫(xiě)作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類(lèi)寫(xiě)作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。ComputerandI??(BySimon)滬江Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascination
5、onmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.exceedingly替換verythrilling替換excitingsth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替換sb.beinterestedinsth.google替換sear
6、chanarmyof替換alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeas
7、ure!Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一個(gè)精彩句型,用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasingpopularity替換moreandmorepopularCoincidentwith…非常地道的句型,表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思,替換With…Advancement替換developmentPourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替換enterintoCurrent(currently)替換nowAppealtosb.替換sb.beinterestedinsth.Growingindiv
8、iduals替換moreandmorepeopleItisnoexaggerationtosay經(jīng)典句型,說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的滬江四六級(jí)Forastar