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1、WritingNotesDate:July,9th,2017TaskI1.ThreeTypesi.Data:BarChart,LineGraph,Table,PieChartu圖表類型:動態(tài)圖、靜態(tài)圖u動態(tài)圖:有兩個或以上時間u重點l趨勢l特殊值:起點、重點、最高點、最低點、交叉點u靜態(tài)圖:只有一個或者沒有時間l比較描述對象:使用倍數(shù)、比較級ii.Process:FlowChartiii.MapuDescribethechangeuEg:Hospitalislocatedtothewestofcarpark2.評分標準i.TaskA
2、chievement/TaskResponseuCovertheRequirementsofthetaskuNoofftopicsu不能添加主觀想法,只能描述ii.CoherenceandCohesiveu使用路標性詞匯:順承和轉折iii.LexicalResourceu使用非高頻詞匯uUsewordsandphrasesnaturallyandappropriatelyuVocabularydiversityuAccuratespellingwordsiv.GrammaticalRangeandAccuracyuAccurateg
3、rammarofsentencesuUsedifferentrangesofsentences,structurestoachievergrammatical3.寫作方法i.開頭段u圖表詞改寫lThechart:barchart,linechart,piechart,table,diagramu動詞shows改寫l注意時態(tài)lShows:illustrates,givesinformationabout,compares,indicates,demonstratesu關鍵詞(一定要改寫)l數(shù)量改寫nThenumberof+可數(shù)nThe
4、amountof+不可數(shù)nThequantityof+可/不可數(shù)nThefigurefor+可/不可數(shù)l百分比改寫nThepercentageof:theproportionofl句式變化nCompares+不同事物+intermsof+相同事物l名詞變化nExpending:expenditureu地點(可以不改寫)u時間可以改寫lFrom1980to2000:between1980and2000,duringtheperiodfrom1980to2000,overtheperiodof20years,overa20-yearpe
5、rioduEG:ThebarchartscomparesthreetypesoftelephonecallsintermsoftheamountoftimespentintheUKbetween1995and2002.ii.主段寫法u第一段:起點數(shù)值對比+部分趨勢u第二段:剩下趨勢+終點值對比u數(shù)字三種表述方法l數(shù)值放在句首nEG:60milliontonnesofgoodsweretransportedbyroadintheUK.l數(shù)值放在句末nStandat=be;stoodat=was=totallednEG:Theamoun
6、tofgoodstransportedbyroadintheUKwas60milliontonnes.lThereBe句型nEG:Therewere60billiontonnesofgoodstransportedbyroadintheUK.u比較句的寫法Comparisonsl“comparedto”,“comparedwith”,“incomparisonwith”+短語nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpoverty,comparedtoonly4%ofagedcouplel“while”,“whe
7、reas”+句子nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpoverty,whiletheproportionofagedcouplelivinginpovertywas4%.u3個數(shù)值的對比寫法l第一個數(shù)值thepercentageatthestartl第二個數(shù)值addacomparisonl第三個數(shù)值thefigureforlEG:1999,35%ofBritishpeoplewentabroadfortheirholidays,comparedto28%ofAustraliansspenttheirholi
8、daysinadifferentcountry.ThefigurefortheUSAstoodat31%.l若有3個以上的數(shù)值,可以用thefigurefor數(shù)值Cand數(shù)值DwereXandXrespectively.u趨勢的寫法l