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1、TheLifeinFudan,TheLifeinFudan范文大學(xué)英語作文TheLifeinFudan英語作文網(wǎng)收集整理作文網(wǎng)TheLifeinFudanFudanUniversityisclaimedtopositionthethirdinChina.GivenachancetostudyinFudanasanexchangestudentforonesemester,IcarriedmyluggageentandaspiredtohavingafruitfulsemesterinFudan.Butpus,
2、Iyroom.Theroomissharedbysixstudents.Thetoiletisunbearablydirty,osquitoes,germsandbacteria.Themostunbelievablethingisthatallstudentsinahostelshareonebathroomandallofushavetoore,thereisnoaccesstotheInterandnotanyTVinourdormitory.Bythen,Irealizedhoplyconfuseda
3、bouttheent.IdoubtmyabilityofadaptationasIamthekindofstudents,bingtoandbeatenbydifficulties.ButafterlivingyclassmatesafeproudthatIgraduallygetusedtothelifehereandconsiderthepoorenvironmentasachallengetome.Infact,nostudentsinthefacultyareimmunefromthekindofli
4、fehere.Thoseecanlivehappilyhere,socanI.Theycanconcentrateontheirstudieshere,achinesandnoair-conditioningsystem,butatleastIhaveelectricityandfanstostaycool;Ihaveforeachroom,IdifferentroomsintimesofostpreciouslessonIlearnfromstudentshereistheirattitudesofstud
5、ying.Theyaresodevotedandindustriousthattheygetupsoearlyinthemorning,queuingforaseatinthelibraryorstudyinginclassroomtilllateatnight.Studentsaredeterminedtoachievetheirfar-sightedtarget,likecontinuingtheirstudiesaspostgraduates.Besides,thestudentsherepossess
6、knoplyfocusingononespecificarea.（作文網(wǎng)zisapricelessandinspiringlessontome,asurprisetomethatcausesmetotreasurethethingsIhave,evensomeminorthingssurethattheingyearmunefrom，succumbto等的使用就格外引人注目，因為這些地道的搭配和表達(dá)方式往往在大陸大學(xué)生作文中很難找到。另一方面，在文章中表達(dá)了自己的真實感受，比如使用shocked來描述自己初到
7、新的生活環(huán)境的感受，又接連使用了兩個so來表達(dá)自己對復(fù)旦學(xué)子的勤奮學(xué)習(xí)的無比欽佩，顯得坦率而真誠。當(dāng)然，段落清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，也是本文的一大優(yōu)點。可能是出于個人寫作風(fēng)格，有點偏愛排比的修辭手段，但對同義詞的排比如germsandbacteria，devotedandindustrious等最好適當(dāng)控制，語言就更上一層樓了。(點評教師：孫東云)TheLifeinFudan英語作文網(wǎng)收集整理作文網(wǎng)
