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1、托福寫(xiě)作首段常見(jiàn)誤區(qū) 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：托福寫(xiě)作想要取得高分不容易啊很多考生有疑惑才能快速提高托福寫(xiě)作成績(jī)呢為了幫到大家小編下面為大家?guī)?lái)了托福寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)誤區(qū)的介紹一起來(lái)看看吧 一：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈 典型失敗案例：Topic1Thehappiestmomentinyourlife Inourlife,therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily…… Topic2Thepopulationproblem Thepopulationproblemisaverybigprob
2、lem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere. Topic3Istherefairnessintoday’sbusinessworld? Ithinkintoday’ssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings…… Topic4Theadvantageofbeinganiceperson Be
3、inganicepersonhavemanyadvantage.Ibelieveifapeoplealwaysdobadthings,hewillget“baoying”. 二：廢話連篇不知所云 典型失敗案例：Topic1Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried? Thistopicisveryinteresting.I’mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseI’malsoacollegestudentandI’mnotmarried…… 修改方案：
4、開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山直奔主題 Inmyopinion,itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried. Topic2Willmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation? Ok,thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First,letmetellyouastory:Ihaveafriend,helikesgoontheinterne
5、tverymuch.Everyday,heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife. Topic3Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotection Oh,thistopicissurelyveryimportant.Isn’tit?OfcourseIt’sreallyveryveryimportant 三：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹 典型失敗案例：TopicIfchildr
6、enbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished? Aboutthisproblem,mythinkisifchildrenbehavebadly,thenparentsarenotright.Becauseteachchildisparent’sresponsibility.Sowealsopunishparentstoobesideschildrenisalsoshould. 四：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧 典型失敗案例：TopicShouldcollegestuden
7、tsbeallowedtogetmarried? Ithinkthistopicisveryhardtosay.BecauseIamstillverylittle,only17,andnotmarried,sothistopicisverydifficultforme…… 五：偏離主題無(wú)軌電車 典型失敗案例：TopicItissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeduca
