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1、立竿見影的提分句式1.非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)島名：釣魚島地理位置：中國東海歸屬為中國固有領(lǐng)土信息量不足的表達方式：(1)DiaoyuislandislocatedintheEastChinaSea. ?(2)DiaoyuislandhasalwaysbeentheinherentterritoryofChina.優(yōu)化：Diaoyuisland,locatedintheEastChinaSea,hasalwaysbeentheinherentterritoryofChina.2.“with”結(jié)構(gòu)語種：?漢語歷史：???超過三千年 現(xiàn)狀：???
2、約1/5世界人口在使用信息量不足的表達方式：(1)Chinesehasahistoryofmorethanthreethousandsyears. (2)Chineseisusedbyapproximatelyonefifthoftheworldpopulation.優(yōu)化：Withahistoryofmorethanthreethousandsyears,Chineseisusedbyapproximatelyonefifthoftheworldpopulation.3.同位語結(jié)構(gòu)人物：杜老師職業(yè)：?英語老師 描述：可愛，經(jīng)常用
3、甜美的聲音和我們說話信息量不足的表達方式：(1)Mrs.DuisaverylovelyEnglishteacher. ?(2)Mrs.Dualwaystalkstousinhersweetvoice.優(yōu)化：Mrs.Du,averylovelyEnglishteacher,alwaystalkstousinhersweetvoice.4.倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)1:否定前置+部分倒裝權(quán)利：免費參加外籍教師的周末英語講座；暑假參加學(xué)校組織的學(xué)生赴英訪問團。ReporterscanattendtheweekendEnglishlecturegiven
4、bytheforeignteachers,andvisitEnglandwiththestudents’visitingteamduringsummervacation.notonly…..butalso…NotonlycanreportersattendtheweekendEnglishlecturegivenbytheforeignteachers,butalsovisitEnglandwiththestudents’visitingteamduringsummervacation.Facedwithdifficulties
5、,neverdotheygiveupbuttrytheirbesttoovercomethem.4.倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)2:only+狀語，部分倒裝Onlywhenyoulostit,couldyourealizehowpreciousitis.Onlybystudyingwell,canyourealizeyourdream.4.倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)3:adj+as/thoughsbis,他雖然很累，依然幫助了我Tiredashewas,hestillhelpedme.5.定語從句中國吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億 ??分布：男性占3/4(1)Thereare
6、approximately350millionsmokersinChina(2)Threefourthsofthemaremales.優(yōu)化：Thereareapproximately350millionsmokersinChina,threefourthsofwhomaremales.第一個學(xué)位：1936年獲得第二個學(xué)位：醫(yī)學(xué)博士Hegainedhisfirstdegreein1936andyearslater,hereceivedanotherdegreeasamedicaldoctor優(yōu)化：Hegainedhisfirstd
7、egreein1936,afterwhich,hereceivedanotherdegreeasamedicaldoctor6.被動語態(tài)bedone我們應(yīng)該立刻想辦法解決水資源短缺問題Weshouldimmediatelytakesomemeasurestosolvetheproblemofwater-shortage.優(yōu)化：Itishightimethatsomeimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.
