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1、(建議用時(shí):10分鐘/篇)1Recentlycampussafetyhasbecomepublicconcernsinceaseriesofviolentattackshappened,whichcausesseriousdamage.Itmakesusawareofthefactthatsafetyshouldalwayscomefirstlyinourdailylife.Inthiscase,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurewhichcansolvethisproblem.Firs
2、tly,ourstudentsshouldrealizewemustfollowourschoolortrafficrules,andpayattentiontofoodsafety,becausemanyincidentshappenjustbecauseofwearetoocareless.Secondly,youshouldtaketrainingofsecuritysothatwecankeepcalmiffacedwithconflicts.Thirdly,ourgovernmentandschoo
3、lsshouldprovidesurroundingsthatourstudentscanburythemselvesintheirstudies.AsfarasIamconcerned,improvingcampussafetyisveryimportantthatweallshouldtryourbesttomakeanyoneoncampussafeandsound.92DearTim,IamLiHua.Thisismylastyearofhighschool,andI’llgraduatethissu
4、mmer.I’meighteenyearold.ThereisthreepeopleinmyfamilyandI’mtheonlyonechild,whoisverycommoninChinesefamilies.Myfatherworkinafactoryandmymotherisateacher.Welivedahappylifetogether.I’mcheerfulboy.Besidesmycourses,Ihavemuchhobbies,likeplayingfootball,basketballa
5、ndswimming.Inthepast,Icollectedinalotofstamps,whichareverypreciouslynowbecauseweseldompostaletternowadays.Iwonderifyoucantellmesomethingaboutmyself,yourfamilyanddailyschool.Bestwishes,LiHua93Today,myforeignteacherTimandIwenttothePeople’sParktogether.Wetakea
6、taxianditwasn’tlongbeforewearrivedatthepark.Atseeingthegreentreesandbeautifulflower,Timcouldn’twaittotakepictures.Itwasatthatmomentwhenwefoundhiscamerawasmissing.Hewasveryworriedbutsearchedalloverhisbackpack.Sadly,hejustcouldn’tfindit.Suddenlyitstrucktometh
7、athemighthaveleftitinthetaxi.SoIimmediatelygottouchwiththetaxicompany.Abouthalfanhourlater,thedriverreturnedthecamera.Bothofusweregratefullytothedriver,andTim,inparticular,insistedonhaveaphototakenwithhim.TimandIenjoyedthemselvesduringtherestoftheday.94Dear
8、Mom,AsMother’sDayisapproaching,I’dliketosharewithyouagreatmanyword.Firstofall,IwanttotellyouIamverygratefultoyouforwhichyouhavedoneforme.Thankyouverymuchforbringmeuptobehappyandbraveinaoftendifficultso