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1、閱卷老師的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)切題,把段落當(dāng)中每一個標(biāo)題都要覆蓋用詞不重復(fù)句式變化多杜絕中國式的英文文章當(dāng)中的閃光點卷面的整潔,正確的修改形式閱卷老師的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一、切題,把段落當(dāng)中每一個標(biāo)題都要覆蓋。Whatwouldhappeniftherewerenopower?ItpaystobehonestAletterinreplytoafriendSchedulefortheday二、句式變化多(Expressions)句子的多樣性(簡單句,復(fù)合句,及省略句、倒裝句)例:在簡單句當(dāng)中運(yùn)用幾種結(jié)構(gòu):主語+謂語+賓語主語+謂語+雙賓語(直接賓語,間接賓語
2、)主語+謂語+賓補(bǔ)注意運(yùn)用Therebe的句型Onecarcome,onecargo,twocarbangbang,onecardie.盡量多用一些被動語態(tài),多用名詞做主語,用被動代替主動,豐富文章當(dāng)中的句式變化。例:Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.Heshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusic.Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.六大從句的運(yùn)用:賓語從句定語從句狀語從句主語從句表語從
3、句同位語從句AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththepointthat-------Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-------------AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat------------三、用詞不重復(fù)必須要注意寫作的具體元素及,用詞切記多余重復(fù)(redundancy)一個詞下一次提到表示相同的意思應(yīng)該用不同的詞來表達(dá)。盡量用詞組和從句代替一個詞的用法:forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acase
4、inpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprisingnice/incredible/fabulous/incredibleinterviewee/jobapplicant/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.用句子和詞組來代替一個詞inthefirstplace,inthesecondplaceTherearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintainthat----Itgoeswithout
5、sayingthat-------------AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat------------四、文章當(dāng)中的閃光點在四級考試作文題目當(dāng)中適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用諺語可以起到畫龍點睛的作用,增加文章當(dāng)中的閃光點。但是諺語引用在文章中最多不能超過三次,引用的諺語也不能太偏。Eachcoinhastwosides.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”Alittlele
6、arningisaverydangerousthing.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.五、杜絕中國式的英文Asaproverbsays:“AmericaandChinanotenough.”Isawabreadcarkissawalkmanintheman-line.Leftseesee,rightseesee.Thedriverishorsehorsetigertiger.Onestop,twosee,threeacross.Iwilldoanhonestman.Nomoney,notalk.
7、Dr.Kong’shusbandMiaoYounoseeme,younogo.Inoseeyou,Inogo.Noseenogo.WritingModelsNowadays/atpresent,withthedevelopmentofhumancivilization,aswellasthesignificantimprovementofthescienceoftechnology,andduetotherapidchangesinoursociallives,moreandmorepeopleareconcerningaboutwh
8、ether文章主題,Asaresult,thetopicof把主題改寫為被動,isincreasinglybecomingthemostpopularcontroversyrecently,whichraisesmany