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5、eeverrnerftherldTherearestillpepleharentbathedinthesunshineThebeggarisustnefthe簡評本文用生動的語言形象地刻畫了一位在路邊以乞討為生的孤苦老人。作者非常注重細節(jié)的描寫,如乞討者布滿皺紋、飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的臉,亂蓬蓬油膩的頭發(fā),半張半合的眼睛,粗糙的手,瘦弱的腿和脖子,他面前的破碗,破爛的衣服等。還包括乞討者的動作,如向行人點頭,伸手乞討等。此外,作者還描述了行人厭惡的神色,進一步渲染了乞討者艱難的處境,以喚起讀者的共鳴。美中不足的是作者對乞討者的描寫
6、沒有遵循一定的順序。描寫文的寫作一般要按一定的空間順序組織,如:從上到下、從里到外、從遠到近等,使文章顯得更有條理。此外,在描寫人物時,要抓住其最主要的特征,避免面面俱到。本文在語言表達上的一大特色是詞匯豐富而準確。如bn(hees),thin(ne),bedraggled(hair),gnarled(hand),strething,tisting,interseting(rinles),dilapidated(bl)等。作者還恰如其分地運用了一些修辭手法,特別是比喻,如Hishairisbedraggledliean
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