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1、高考英語MyPocketMoney英語書面表達寫作指導????假如你是某國際學校記者站的小記者,你校以"HowISpendMyPocketMoney"為題向全校學生做問卷調查,結果如以下表格所示。請你寫一篇文章分析該調查結果反映的問題并給出你的建議,發(fā)表在校英文網站上。詞數(shù):120左右。項目花費(元/月)占每月總支出百分比書籍1512.5%文具108.3%服裝5041.7%[零食2016.7%娛樂2520.8%合計120100%寫作分析:第一步,認真審題,提煉要點。????一審體裁:本次寫作任務為說明文體裁寫作。????二審結構:文章可分為三部分。首先,簡要交代關于問卷調
2、查的一些情況,如調查的內容和結果等,以引出寫作的主題。然后,結合表格中的數(shù)據分析調查結果反映的問題。最后,根據反映的問題給出自己的建議。????三審要點:用英語思維,理出寫作要點。1.spend120yuanofpocketmoney2.don’tspendmuchonbooksandstationery3.leadtoseriousproblems4.pursuematerialcomforts5.helpthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably6.theirparentsandteachers第二步,緊扣主題,擴點成句。1.Ahighschool
3、studentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.2.Theydon’tspendmuchonbooksandstationery.3.Studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems.4.Theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts.5.Forthesakeofhelpingthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably...6.Theirparentsandteacher
4、sshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly.第三步,補充修改,連句成篇。范文1:Nowadaysahighschoolstudentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.Almosthalfofthemoneyisspentonclothing.Andthemoneyspentonamusementandsnackstakesup20.8%and16.7%ofthe120yuanrespectively.However,theydon’tspendmu
5、chonbooksandstationery.Obviously,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems.Forexample,theymaylearntopursuematerialcomfortsandcompareclothingwiththatoftheirclassmates,bothofwhichwillhaveabadimpactontheirstudies.3用心愛心專心Accordingly,forthesakeofhelpingthestu
6、dentsspendmoneyreasonably,theirparentsandteachersshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly.亮點展示:1.文章結構合理:首段介紹調查情況,第二段闡述其危害,最后一段提出自己的建議;2.正確使用定語從句,使文章句式多樣:...,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothing...,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems./...,theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts...,
7、bothofwhichwillhaveabad...3.obviously和accordingly不僅使文章更有邏輯性,而且起到了承上啟下的作用。范文2:Accordingtothesurveyon"HowISpendMyPocketMoney"conductedbyourschool,studentsspendabout120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.Comparedwiththesmallamountspentonbooksandstationery,almosthalfofth