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1、Thereadingpassageandtheprofessorarebothtalkingaboutwhethermedicalinformationshouldberecoredbyelectricaleditioninsteadofthehardcopies.Theauthormentionsthreebenefitsofusingelectronicmedicalrecord,yettheprofessorstatesthatthemetritsoftheadoptionofelectronicrecordsystema
2、renotcertain.Theauthorcitesthatelectronicrecordscanhelpussavealotofmoneyandspace.Wedonothavetousepapertorecordthemedicalinformation,whichmeanswecansimplyduplicateandtransferitinsteadofcopyandfaxit.However,theprofessormentionsthattheuseofelectronicrecordwillnotcutthec
3、ost,becausewestillneedtousetheemergencybackupandthesignature,thatistosay,thecoststillexists.Theauthoralsocitesthatbyusingelectronicrecords,peoplecouldpreventalotofhandwritingerrors,whichmightcauseseriousbadimpactonthepatient.But,theprofessorsaysthateventhouthweusethe
4、electronicrecords,thoseerrorsstillexists,becausewecouldnotpreventtheman-mademistakesandsomeoftheerrorsmightcausedbysomestaffinsteadofthedoctors.Maybetheelectronicrecordsarejusttypedintothesystembythestafflongafterthedoctorfinishedwritingthemdown,sointheprocessthestaf
5、fwillprobablymisinterpretthemeaningonthehardcopied.Theauthorassertsthattheelectronicrecordscanhelpmedicalresearchbyusingitshugedatabase,sotheinformationcouldbeeasilyaccessedfromanyplace,yettheprofessorpointsoutthatpeoplewillstillhardtoaccessthedatatheyaresearchingfor
6、becauseintheUSA,thereareverystrictprivacylawstoprotectthepatients'privateinformation.So,iftheywanttogetintothatsystem,theyneedtogetamountainofpermissions.Andthedoctorcanblockthefilesforanypurpose,sotherecordsarenotaccessedforgranted.總結:1.我不知道為什么我這篇綜合打了330words但我覺得我還是
7、在這上面浪費了一些時間,所以我在檢查typo的時候沒那么認真2.R2這里有個細節(jié)是醫(yī)生需要用penandpaperwhileexaminingthepatient我沒寫進去