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1、高考英語滿分英語作文作文題目假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右：2.參考詞匯：房租tent.i'mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andi'mgladtohearthatyouwillgotochinatolearnchinesehere.ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.itisonfangcaostreet,whichisnotfarfromjianx
2、inchineseschool.busno.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforethechineseschool.theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwis
3、h,buti'lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandiwilllookforanotherbetterplace.hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!allthebest!yours,lihua滿分理由本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以'which，'引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。dearbob,welcometochina!youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.ihav
4、efoundanapartmentonfangcaostreetnearjianxinchineseschool.itisonthethirdfloorandthere'rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.justtaketheno.11bus
5、atthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.itisonlyonestop.atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?theni'ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.bestwishes!yours,lihua滿分理由本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。dearbob,howareyouthesedays?i'msogladtoknowthatyou'llcometoourc
6、itytolearnchinese.youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.nowi'vefoundonewhichithinkisprettygood.theplaceisonfangcaostreetwhichisneartheno.11busstop.it'sjustonestopawayfromjianxinchineseschool.therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,ithinkitissuitable.byth
7、eway,therentis500yuanpermonth.ihopeyou'lllikeit.ifnot,i'lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.yours,lihua滿分理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。dearbob,i'msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnchinesehere.i'vealready
