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1、高二英語讀后續(xù)寫（5.21）一、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Atfirst,?Surrell?didn'tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindows?ofhisneighbors'?home.Heandhiswifewerejusthavingadinnerintheirownhouse?inAllentown,?Pennsylvania,whentheyheardsomeonescreaming,“Thehouseison?fire!”Hewent
2、toinvestigate.?That'swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlcrazilyata?lossontheirporch(走廊).?Itwashisneighbor'shouse.“Thebaby'sinsidethere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartment?hadbeencalled,Surrell,then64,instinctively(本能地)raninside.“Thebaby”was?8-year-old?Tiara?Roberts,whoa
3、lwayscalledhimUncle?Surrell.Shewasthewoman's?granddaughterandaplaymateofSurrell'sthreeyoungestkids,8,10,and12.The?othertwoontheporchwereTiara'sauntandcousin.Enteringtheburninghousewaslikerunninginto“abucketofblackpaint”.The?thick?smoke?causedSurrelltowalkblindlyaround
4、,?burned?hiseyes,andmadeit?impossibleforhimtobreathe.Hefelthisthroatandlungs?burned,andeveryblink?stung(蟄)hiseyes.?Theconditionswouldhavebeenvery?dangerous?foranyone,but?forSurrell,whohaschronicobstructivepulmonarydisease(慢性阻塞性肺病)and?wasin?hospital?justhalfayearago,th
5、eywerelife-risking.Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhousesearchingbutinvain,heran?outside?tocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately.?“Thesecondfloor,”?herauntshoutedback.Surrellknewhecouldn'tholdhisbreathforlong.Soheutteredalittleprayer,“Well,God,thisisit.?Yo
6、ugottohelpme,becauseI'mnotcomingoutwithoutthat?littlegirl.”注意：1.?所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；2.?應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.?續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.?續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Takingadeephealth,hewentinasecondtime.____________________________________Paragraph2:Surrellwokeupint
7、hehospitalacoupleofdayslater.?_______________________________【寫作思路與分析】此題要求根據(jù)短文的情節(jié)，結(jié)合所提供的關(guān)鍵詞語以及所續(xù)寫段落的開頭語來進(jìn)行續(xù)寫。短文續(xù)寫可以遵循以下步驟：?（一）文本分析本文敘述了Surrell不顧自己年老體弱，奮不顧身地沖進(jìn)火海救護(hù)鄰居小孩Tiara的故事。在閱讀文本時(shí)，我們要帶著when(havingadinner)、where(Surrell'sneighbor's?home,thesecondfloor,hospital)、who(S
8、urrell,Tiara,Tiara'sGrandmotherandTiara'srelatives)、what(FirebrokeoutandTiarawastrappedonthesecondfloor)、why(Thehousewasonfi
