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1、續(xù)寫--驚慌篇安慰篇驚慌篇1.Rigowasalittlenervous,loweringhisheadandcouldn'thelptrembling,butheforcedhimselfnottopanic.2.Sensingmystressandfearoftheunknown,hetriedtomakemelaugh.感知到我對未來的緊張和擔憂,...3.Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.舌頭打結手心出汗4.Af
2、loodoftensionwelledupinhim./Tensionfloodedoverhim.5.Hisheartbeatwildlyandhislegstrembled,feelinghisthroattightened.感到嗓子發(fā)緊6.Scaredandnervous,shewasfrozentothespot.安慰篇詞組:1.patsb.ontheshoulder2.looksb.gentlyintheeyes3.castcomfortingglanceatsb.4.hug/holdsb.i
3、none'sarms句子:1.Hedidn'tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandstightly.2.Shestroked(輕撫)herfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid,”Thingsaregoingtobefine.”3.Thewomanwasstaringtenderly(和善溫柔地atthegirl,wipingouttearsfromhercheek.4.Seeinghercondition,Iimmediatelyfe
4、ltahugesurge(洶涌)ofsympathyforher.Itwascomingdeepfromwithinmyheart.Para.TimePlacePlotEmotionPara.1apastexperienceairport3hourslatergottothe…watched…setmyluggageontheairportsidewalkWhy?--anxious:myanxietyhadjustbegunPara.2terminalof…myfirstvisitalone-unfam
5、iliarhadtofindhelp-couldn’tbelateanxious+panicPara.3triedbutinvainanotherbus–followedanxious–awful-hopefulPara.4elevatorsFloor3wasabandonedpressedbutton3nocheck-incountersindespairhelplesshopelessPara.5TearsformedinmyeyesasIsawtheemptyhallandrealizedthat
6、Iwouldmissmyplane.點1點21.I–失望難過—表現(xiàn)2.老人見到—安慰-主動提出幫助Para.6WhenIturnedtothankhimforallhishelp,hewasgone.點1點2I–遺憾心懷感激從中學到什么?讀原文(一個中心兩個基本點三條線)預測全文走向(兩條線)定結局—讀首句定段意-細節(jié)刻畫Who:WhenWhere:Why:How:I,anairportemployeeBeforetakingmyplanehometheterminalairport,theelevat
7、or,thethirdfloorIwasanxious,forthiswasthefirstvisitalonetotheairportThiswasmyvisit__________totheinternationalterminaloftheairport.Nothingwas_________,andIevendidn'tknow_______wasthecheck-in-counter.ItriedtoaskapassingbusinessmanbutfailedbecauseIdidn'tex
8、pressclearly.Anotherbusarrived,I__________allthepassengersandfinallyreachedthe_____________,butIdidn'tmanagetofitinandwas____________again.ThenIgotonit,butIpressedthewrongbutton3.Onthethirdfloor,therewasnocheck-in-countera