模板觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類.doc

《模板觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類.doc》由會(huì)員上傳分享，免費(fèi)在線閱讀，更多相關(guān)內(nèi)容在教育資源-天天文庫(kù)。

1、寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練：觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類典例最近，你校同學(xué)正在參觀某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信客觀地介紹討論情況。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：1.不應(yīng)該收門票1.應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高2.公園是公眾休閑的地方2.支付園林工人工資3.如收門票，須建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象3.購(gòu)置新花木注意：1.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好；2.詞數(shù)：不少于120詞；3.參考詞匯：門票entrancefee【寫(xiě)作策略】1.仔細(xì)審題：(1)體裁：信。(2)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。(3)人稱：第三人稱。2.確定結(jié)構(gòu)：(1)Formalgreeting——可

2、以用Deareditor/Sir/Madam/DrSmith等。(2)Bodylanguage——正反雙方觀點(diǎn)以及原因。(3)Formalending——結(jié)束語(yǔ)還要帶上Yourstruly/sincerely等。3.篩選詞匯：(discussion，bechargedfor，payfor，takeon，anentrancefee等。)4.句型搜索：(Iamwritingto.../Wehaveadiscussionabout.../Itwillbenecessaryto...等。)5.組句成篇：(常用tobeginwith，onthecontrary等。)【范文賞析】Dea

3、reditor，①I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussion②wehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectation.③Tobeginwith，aparkisusuallyconsideredtobeaplacewherethepublichaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.④On

4、thecontrary，⑤ifanentrancefeemustbepaidbythevisitorsforparks，it’llbenecessarytobuildagateandsurroundingwalls.⑥Theendisthatacitywilltakeonabadlook.⑦However，40%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeecanbeaccepted，butitmustnotbetooexpensive.Themoneyfromtheticketscanbeusedforpayingthegardenersint

5、heparkandbuyingsomeotherkindsofflowersandtrees.⑧Withregardtomyself，Ithinkanentrancefeeisnecessary.Itcouldprotectthegarden.Doyouagreewithme？Yours，LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】★①②首句表明寫(xiě)信目的，并用限制性定語(yǔ)從句銜接，明確了爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn)?！铫邰軆?nèi)容上，從正面論述不贊同收費(fèi)的原因；句式上時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和限制性定語(yǔ)從句有機(jī)結(jié)合?！铫轂闂l件狀語(yǔ)從句，⑥從反面論述收費(fèi)的弊端。正反論述是議論文常用手法，增強(qiáng)文章的說(shuō)服力?！铫邔?duì)比轉(zhuǎn)折，過(guò)渡到下文，陳

6、述另外一方觀點(diǎn)?！铫啾磉_(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，此句為適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！锟傮w評(píng)價(jià)：文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，條理清晰，作者使用了不少高級(jí)句子；邏輯嚴(yán)密，正反論述，說(shuō)服力強(qiáng)?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】Elegance(優(yōu)雅)(原文)Soso(普通)(1)I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.WehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksandIwillwritetoyouabout

7、it.(2)60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectation.60%ofusstudentsthinkthatpeoplewouldn’tliketopayanentrancefee.(3)Tobeginwith，aparkisusuallyconsideredtobeaplacewherethepublichaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.Someclass