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1、智課網(wǎng)TOEFL備考資料留學(xué)文書批改:個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷—托福寫作文書批改:個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷。TP0小站綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)及批改意見(jiàn):總的來(lái)說(shuō),這份個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,相關(guān)核心點(diǎn)都是有羅列到的,但要注意一些細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題,比如EDUCATIONBACKGROUND方面,一定要寫出具體的GPA。關(guān)于得獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷這塊,高中時(shí)期的就不要提了。大學(xué)期間的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng),那些班級(jí),團(tuán)體的,跟申請(qǐng)專業(yè)無(wú)關(guān)的,建議考慮往厲挪。先羅列專業(yè)活動(dòng)和經(jīng)歷。實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷最好要與巾請(qǐng)專業(yè)相關(guān)。原文:Mr.XXX(FamilyName)XXXX(LastName)E-mail:XXXXXXX@gmail.comEDUCATONBACKGROUND08/20
2、09-06/2013CollegeofSoftwareEngineering,XXXXXUniversityNanjing,ChinaMajor:SoftwareEngineeringWORKEXPERIENCE07/2012-01/2013Intern,NanjingXiangboSoftwareTechCo.Ltd0ProcessandsortSQLSERVERdocuments0RecordandreportsiteworkingstatusEXTRACURRICULARACTIVITIES2009-2011ACMClub0Studymathematicsand
3、algorithms0TrainforannualACMcompetitions2009-2011DeepWebSearchProject0Researchonthedeepweb0Developdeepwebsearchengineinparticularfield2010SummerSoftwareProjectTraining10LearntoprogramwithMFC0Developtrafficviolationenquirysystem2011SummerSoftwareProjectTraining20LearntoprogramwithC#0Deve
4、loponlinesellingwebsiteHONORS&AWARDSUniversity0SilverMedalinACM/ICPCAsiaRegionalContestChengduSite0BronzeMedalinACM/ICPCAsiaRegionalContestFuzhouSite0BronzeMedalinACM/ICPCAsiaInvitationalContestHangzhouSite0ThePrincipalScholarshipinSoutheastUniversity0The2ndPrizeinSoutheastUniversityPro
5、grammingSubjectCompetitionHighSchool0The1stPrizeinNationalHighSchoolMathematicsCompetition0The2ndPrizeinPhysicsOlympiad0The2ndPrizeinChemistryOlympiad0PrizeofMinShengBankSubjectCompetitionAward0The2ndPrizeinSoutheastUniversityEntraneeExemptionPriorityTPO小站綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)及批改意見(jiàn):總的來(lái)說(shuō),這份個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,相關(guān)核心點(diǎn)都是有羅
6、列到的,但要注意一些細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題,比如EDUCATIONBACKGROUND方面,一定要寫出具體的GPA是多少,也可列出一些擅長(zhǎng)的科目。關(guān)于得獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷這塊,高中時(shí)期的就不要提了。大學(xué)期間的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng),那些班級(jí),團(tuán)體的,跟巾請(qǐng)專業(yè)無(wú)關(guān)的,建議考慮往后挪。先羅列專業(yè)活動(dòng)和經(jīng)歷。實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,也是需要盡量講岀白己做過(guò)跟申請(qǐng)專業(yè)相關(guān)的工作內(nèi)容冇哪些。獲得了什么技能等等。關(guān)于課外活動(dòng)的介紹,建議先挑一些專業(yè)性強(qiáng)的,依次再到娛樂(lè),課外其他方而的。最后,建議將CV盡量控制在一頁(yè)里面,實(shí)在不行就一頁(yè)半。IELTS名師GRE名師4>BARX?fl±MIHft大*代"■士A?
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