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1、托福TP0第22套獨立寫作真實批改報告訂單編號:sp201307020601252952題型:托福獨立寫作題目:TPO第22套原文字數(shù):437批改時間:2013年07月02日18:02Nowadays,lasthedevelopingofthesocietyandgovernment,people23startstohavedifferent4thought5of6thiscountry.Some78ofthemwould9talkaboutitpersonally,lObutsomellpeoplewillstarttospreadtheirvie
2、wspublicly,suchasl2internet13,1415posteronthestreet16andsoon.However,personally,Idonotthinkteachersshouldmaketheirsocialorpoliticalviewsknowntostudentsintheclassroom17,18thefollowingarethereasonswhyIagreewiththestatement.Tobeginwith,thereasonwehave19teacheristolearnacademic20kn
3、owledgesfrom2lthem22orletmesayinanotherway,what's23theteacher^job?Theanswerfromallofus24definitelyisto25tranformtheirknowledgetous.Thisiswhattheteachersshouldbedoingin26theclass27,28wepaytogotoschool,theirclasses,alltheparentswanttheirchildrentoreceivebackisnottheteachers1socia
4、lorpoliticalviews,insteadtheywanttheirchildrentobeeducated.Theywantteacherstochangetheirkids'badbehaviors,unpleasantpersonalitiesorthewaythey29trytostudy?30Alsosomeprivatesschools3lexpectmoremoneythansomepublicschools,thereforeiftheteacherswastestudents1learningtimeby32expresst
5、heirfeeling33ofthissociety,thentheparentswillbe34indignationandunhappy35,36thiswillmainlyaffecttheschoofsreputation,whichnoschool37hope38to39behappened.Moreover,teachersdonothavetherightto40telltheir41viewsofsocialandpoliticaltostudents.Everyone42havethefreedomtodistinguishwhat
6、isgoodor43not.44Theycouldhavedifferentviews45withthe46teachers,47butteacherscannottellthemwhatiswrongorright.Notall48thestudentsreallythinkorcareabout49thecountry'spoliticalor50society51,however,52iftheteachertoldaboutit,53thiswillaffecttheirthoughts.54Forsomekids,theywillnotli
7、stentotheteachersanthinkingthattheyarewrong,butsomekidswilllistentoitandformingthesameviewstronglythatmightleadthemtostartspreadingiteverywhere?Thedangerousthingisthatifthey55angerylyposted56ontheInternet,peoplewhoareopposedtoitwill57commentspoorlyandthiscouldaffecttheir58phyco
8、logyproblem.Tosumup,everyone59havetherighttothinkor60b