資源描述：
《批改網(wǎng)第一單元作文反饋》由會(huì)員上傳分享，免費(fèi)在線閱讀，更多相關(guān)內(nèi)容在教育資源-天天文庫(kù)。
1、批改網(wǎng)第一單元作文反饋一、上交整體情況：已上交學(xué)校作文見(jiàn)文件：《各校第一單元作文集》未上交學(xué)校：二、優(yōu)秀作文欣賞WhatMyLifeWillBeLikein20Years姓名北京十八中學(xué)號(hào)8720640考試序號(hào)1班級(jí)初二(豐臺(tái)區(qū)初二備課組長(zhǎng))班分?jǐn)?shù)95Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteron3rdMarch.I'mwritingtotalkaboutmyfuturelifewithyou.Twentyyearslater,I
2、'llbeanenergeticwomaninmythirties.I'mgoingtobeverysuccessfulinmycareer.Atthattime,IwillhavebeenapopularEnglishteacherinmybelovedjuniorhighschoolinwhichI'mstudyingnow.SometimesIwillgivemystudentsonlineclassesthroughtheinternetandsometimesweareallprese
3、ntintheclassroominperson.Whenweareatschool,playinggameswithmystudentsandhelpingthemwiththeirdifficultieswillbemyroutinebetweenclasses.Asanenthusiasticteacher,Iliketosharemytimewithmylovelychildren.However,Iamgoingtoinsistonmyhobby---readingbooks,whic
4、hIdevelopedwhenIwasyoung.WhenI'mfreefrommybusiness,goingonlineandchattingwithmyfriendsandteacherswillbeaperfectwayofkillingtime.Withthedevelopmentofthetechnology,Iwillliveaneasyandcomfortablelife.Needlesstosay,Iwon'tneedtocleanthehouseorwashclothes,f
5、ortheintelligentrobotwhichisinventedalreadywilldoalltaskslikethat.Inmydailylife,cellphoneswillplayaveryimportantrole,actingasremotecontrols,computers,andsoon.Withahandsomehusbandwholovesme,Iwillliveahappylifetogetherwithhim.AsIdream,alovelygirlwillco
6、meintoourlife,whoisourangel.Playingwithhercanbesosweetatask,andIwillattempttotakegoodcareofher.Havingahappyfamilyandsomanynewproductions,Iwillenjoymyfuturelife.Myfuturelife姓名右安門外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校學(xué)號(hào)8720675考試序號(hào)2班級(jí)初二(豐臺(tái)區(qū)初二備課組長(zhǎng))班分?jǐn)?shù)92.5Intwentyyears,Iwillbethirty-four
7、yearsold.IthinkIwillbeasuccessfulandhappyperson.IwillbeagoodEnglishtranslatorandIwillhavemyEnglishclass.IwilllovemyjobbecauseIloveEnglish.IdonotoftengototheofficebecauseIcanworkathome,accordingtothediaryofmyworklist.Iwon'tneedtowakeupearlyandIcanwork
8、untillateatnightIthinkpeoplemusthaveenoughsleep,inordertobetterwork.Iwillleavehomeandliveinmyownflat.However,IwilllivenearmyparentsandIwillvisitthemoften,Iwillneverforgetmyparents.Everyyear,wewillhaveafamilytriptogether.Inmysparetime,I’mgoingtospeakE
