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1、高分高考英語寫作1.應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性。(1)I[waswalking]alongParkRoadtowardstheeast[when]anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.表達法:makearightturn朝右轉(zhuǎn)彎(2)Thecardidn'tstopbut[droveoff]atgreatspeed[headingwest].表達法:driveoffheadingwest高速向西開去(3)Ontheotherside,[wheretheplaygro
2、undusedtobe]now[standsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary].(4)Afterashortrest,we[hadgreatfunsinging]anddancing,tellingjokesorstories.句式:havefun(in)doingsth(5)Thetimepassedquickly.[Before]weknewit,wehadtosaygoodbyetotheworkers.→使用before譯成:“還未來得及……,就”。(6)Mybrotherwasriding[with]me
3、sittingontheseat[behind].→該句使用with結(jié)構(gòu),其結(jié)構(gòu)為[with+賓語+賓語補足語]。該結(jié)構(gòu)的情景描述功能十分突出。此外,behind一詞用作seat定語的用法也十分輕巧。(7)Thereis[sure]tobealotoffun.→在Thereis句式中加入besureto等表達是十分有用的寫作技巧,又如:Therehappenedtobe...Thereseemstobe...(8)①Motherishappywithallthechildrenathome.②Theboysleptwellwiththewi
4、ndowsopen.③Withhishomeworkdone,hefeltquiterelaxed.他的作業(yè)已經(jīng)完成,他感覺很輕松。with+someone+賓語補足語(形容詞)something(副詞)(介詞短語)(不定式)(現(xiàn)在分詞)(過去分詞)2.要有連貫性要素(1)并列連詞代替從屬連詞的特點是讓讀者自己去補充所連接的兩部分間的邏輯聯(lián)系,根據(jù)兩部分的思想內(nèi)容去推論,從而達到思想表達生動、有力和鮮明的修辭效果。①Wewereleavingthefarm,andeveryfarmworkerseemedsorry.②Itistruehei
5、syoung,but/andyetheisreallygoodatgo.→Itistrue...but...=Itistrue...andyet...=Indeed...but=Indeed...andyet(的確...,然而...)(2)表因果關(guān)系的and①Theteachercame,andclassbegan.②Tomisverytired,andreallyheshouldgotobed.并列句的修辭作用在于它把兩個或幾個平行或?qū)α⒌南嚓P(guān)的思想聯(lián)系在一起,構(gòu)成一比較完整的思想,因而它比兩個或幾個孤立的簡單句的思想內(nèi)容要豐富得多,邏輯
6、關(guān)系要清楚得多。(3)兩個以上的簡單句合并成一個并列句①Tomisill.Hecannotstudy.Hestillattendsschool.→Tomisillandcannotstudy,yethestillattendsschool.②Hesawtheboyinthestreet.Hestoppedtospeaktohim.Hegavehimapenny.→Seeingtheboyinthestreet,hestoppedtospeaktohimandgavehimapenny.③Thehotelismadeofbrick,andth
7、epost-officeis,too.(4)恰如其分地使用連詞and容易收到流暢的效果。連詞and可以交代連接的雙方的相互關(guān)系,如并列關(guān)系、先后關(guān)系、因果關(guān)系等。①Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.→and連接的雙方為met和went,既交代了兩個動作的先后順序,又避免了不必要的贅述。②Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.→and連接的雙方為crops和vegetables兩個名詞。③After
8、ashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesorstories.→and連接的雙方為singing和dancing