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1、大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作講義CollegeEnglishTest-Band4--ESSAYWRITING李貽大英課件CourseObjectives課程目的Thestudentsshould:學(xué)生應(yīng)做到：FamiliarizewiththestructureofCET-4writing熟悉四級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)Raisetheawarenessofthecommonmistakesmadebylearners(yourselves).提高檢查常見錯(cuò)誤的意識(shí)Improvewritingbycorrectingthefore-men
2、tionedmistakes以檢促學(xué)，以改促寫CourseStructure教學(xué)流程Theteacherwillpresent:1.Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePhone2.Badexamplesinthestudents’works.反面教材：以124人的作業(yè)反饋為例3.Suggestedimprovementsforbadexamples強(qiáng)力糾錯(cuò)：以改促寫4.Modelessayforreference參考范文Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePho
3、neDirections:ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheMobilePhone.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:Outline:1.移動(dòng)電話發(fā)展很快2.移動(dòng)電話的好處3.移動(dòng)電話的不足之處EssayStructure：Fourparagraphs作業(yè)反饋，結(jié)構(gòu)把握較好：I
4、ntroductoryParagraph引入段Advantagesparagraph正面論述段connectingdevice:firstly,secondly,…finallyDisadvantagesparagraph反面論述段connectingdevice:first,then,…finallyConclusiveparagraph總結(jié)段IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples主謂搭配不當(dāng)：thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisincreasingrap
5、idly.Themobilephone’susageisbecomingmoreandmoreconvenience.Corrections:改正thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisaccelerating/advancingrapidly.Themobilephonesarebecomingincreasinglyconvenienttouse.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples濫用誤用”moreandmore”：moreandmorepeoplemo
6、reandmoredevelopedmobilephonesbecomemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformance.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Substitutesto”moreandmore”替代法：moreandmorepeople?anincreasingnumberofpeople/agrowingpopulationmoreandmoredeveloped?befurtherdeveloped/improvedmobilephonesbec
7、omemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformance?mobilesarebecomingmuchmoresmarterandwithbetter/higherperformanceIntroductoryParagraph引入段Enrichyourstyles豐富表達(dá)法:眾所周知：asweallknow?itisknowntoallthat/asisknown,手機(jī)的發(fā)展theadvancement/improvement/evolution/developmentofmo
8、bilephonesMostpeoplehavemobilephones.?Themajority/Alargenumber/Alargeproportionofthepublicown/possessmobiles.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Modelparagraphforreference:參考答案Asisknown,theadvancementofthem
